My Goomba From Hell (Even More Screenshots and a poll have been added!)

Spoiler:

Story:When goombas start infesting the mushroom kingdom there is only one suspect boom boom and his bowser robot. So it is up to super mario to save the day!

World 1:GrassyHills/100% Complete!

World 2: Dessert Land/5%   Complete name changed to candied desert

World 3: HotIceAge/5% Complete


World 4: Goomba Factory/0% Complete

World 5: TheHideout/0% Complete.  Please tell me what you think. The game will hopefully be completed this November! also remember to vote in the poll.






this one is gh4 i made
a a mastake.

This Game looks to Be Very Promising .
Keep up the work man.

world maps are good but I found some cutoff in GrassyHills2 screenshot

Mechasaur wrote:world maps are good but I found some cutoff in GrassyHills2 screenshot

yeah i am just getting the hang of the screenshots thing also iam going to be putting the game in two different parts so get ready for more screenshots!

World 1 is almost complete. Game will be released to yoyo games either this December 23 or November 29. It depends when I finish it.

World one is done!

This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is.

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is.

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

I take that as a highly dispirging remark lol I am still working on the game it will be better also it is only my second mario builder game and I have every mario game ever made will fix he problums I just fineshed world 1 WORLD 1 AND I am going to have 5 WORLDS so I am going to fix it it is like a flower it takes time to get really nice!

Alright then, maybe you are right. I really hope the best for this project as I'd like to see some very nice games and I'm happy that there are even people who make mario builder games out there! How many levels does the first world have?

Yohser wrote:Alright then, maybe you are right. I really hope the best for this project as I'd like to see some very nice games and I'm happy that there are even people who make mario builder games out there! How many levels does the first world have?

Are you making a mario game.

Oh, yes, I am making a Mario Game. I'm trying my best on it, and I always try to make my levels look perfect, with no graphical errors and thats very time consuming.. I know how hard it is to make it look good, but it really pays off in the end!

Yohser wrote:Oh, yes, I am making a Mario Game. I'm trying my best on it, and I always try to make my levels look perfect, with no graphical errors and thats very time consuming.. I know how hard it is to make it look good, but it really pays off in the end!

Yeah I already Made some of the changes you said in grassyhills2

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is.

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

I apologize if what I said sounds not so nice to you, I know I could have worded it better. I just want your game to be the best it can possibly be and improve!

I still think that it doesn't really matter what the final boss is. And I wonder how you would change him anyways? I don't know of any way to make a different boss, other than those that are available to you by the editor.

Yohser wrote:I apologize if what I said sounds not so nice to you, I know I could have worded it better. I just want your game to be the best it can possibly be and improve!

I still think that it doesn't really matter what the final boss is. And I wonder how you would change him anyways? I don't know of any way to make a different boss, other than those that are available to you by the editor.

well I did not really no eather it would probably just be bowser only called robot bowser.

levi8george wrote:

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is.

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

not to be mean but what Yohser said is true about your game. It explained that your game lacks scenery, have uninteresting level design, and graphical failure. Although I agree with the final boss selection. I wish you the best of luck and please fix everything Yohser said and make it better.

j

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is. d

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

not to be mean but what Yohser said is true about your game. It explained that your game lacks scenery, have uninteresting level design, and graphical failure. Although I agree with the final boss selection. I wish you the best of luck and please fix everything Yohser said and make it better.

did i ever say my game was done? It is not evan close to being done I just finehed world 1. I AM TYING MY BEST TO STAY CALM BUT IT IS HARD when people think your work is JUNK! Not to be mean but how would you is your game like it if i said your game has a face that would scare snakes? If one more spam post comes in about my game i am DONE with mb! But what hurts me even more is I thought we were all like one big family here at the fourms but i guess we are not are we? But there are some one that likes my game his name is the_mario_gru. and my game has now been shelved i will continue work on it some time in september that is right it will not be coming out this year but when it comes out are you or are you not going to play it i will not take mabey for an awnser. also I am not tying to be mean or cause trouble but it really hurts me you can tell me if you do not like but tell me in a nicer way like i think you should probably fix that or that.

levi8george wrote:j

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is. d

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

not to be mean but what Yohser said is true about your game. It explained that your game lacks scenery, have uninteresting level design, and graphical failure. Although I agree with the final boss selection. I wish you the best of luck and please fix everything Yohser said and make it better.

did i ever say my game was done? It is not evan close to being done I just finehed world 1. I AM TYING MY BEST TO STAY CALM BUT IT IS HARD when people think your work is JUNK! Not to be mean but how would you is your game like it if i said your game has a face that would scare snakes? If one more spam post comes in about my game i am DONE with mb! But what hurts me even more is I thought we were all like one big family here at the fourms but i guess we are not are we? But there are some one that likes my game his name is the_mario_gru. and my game has now been shelved i will continue work on it some time in september that is right it will not be coming out this year but when it comes out are you or are you not going to play it i will not take mabey for an awnser. also I am not tying to be mean or cause trouble but it really hurts me you can tell me if you do not like but tell me in a nicer way like i think you should probably fix that or that.

I'm sorry if you think i was a little bit too harsh on you but next time I won't do that.

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:j

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is. d

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

not to be mean but what Yohser said is true about your game. It explained that your game lacks scenery, have uninteresting level design, and graphical failure. Although I agree with the final boss selection. I wish you the best of luck and please fix everything Yohser said and make it better.

did i ever say my game was done? It is not evan close to being done I just finehed world 1. I AM TYING MY BEST TO STAY CALM BUT IT IS HARD when people think your work is JUNK! Not to be mean but how would you is your game like it if i said your game has a face that would scare snakes? If one more spam post comes in about my game i am DONE with mb! But what hurts me even more is I thought we were all like one big family here at the fourms but i guess we are not are we? But there are some one that likes my game his name is the_mario_gru. and my game has now been shelved i will continue work on it some time in september that is right it will not be coming out this year but when it comes out are you or are you not going to play it i will not take mabey for an awnser. also I am not tying to be mean or cause trouble but it really hurts me you can tell me if you do not like but tell me in a nicer way like i think you should probably fix that or that.

I'm sorry if you think i was a little bit too harsh on you but next time I won't do that.  

well in a way you kind of helped me i started work on my game again i completely changeed the desighn of world 2 and fix up level 3 and now world 2 is just going is just going to be a desert it but not a normal desert what is like you will have to wait.

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:j

Mechasaur wrote:

levi8george wrote:

Yohser wrote:This looks horrible. The overworld maps are just not done right, they are too boring and would be better if they were not so empty and uncreative. The levels look very bad graphically, because of cut-off edges and uninteresting design. Theres just nothing special. I wonder how the good the actual gameplay is. d

You should go and play some Mario Bros games by Nintendo to get ideas and see how horrible your work is. You could also just download the Mario Builder game "Super Luigi - In Search for Mario", that game is made very well and has lots of good ideas in the level design and also the graphical design aspect.

I wish you good luck and I hope you realise how your game might not be so good as you though. Also, about the poll, who cares what the boss is? In any means, the should be fun and it can be fun no matter who it is.

thats

Also I like people to give me ideas for my game Like WHO THE FINAL BOSS IS SUPOSED TO BE! HOW wold you like it if i said your game looks like a big piece of junk. WELL HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT!

not to be mean but what Yohser said is true about your game. It explained that your game lacks scenery, have uninteresting level design, and graphical failure. Although I agree with the final boss selection. I wish you the best of luck and please fix everything Yohser said and make it better.

did i ever say my game was done? It is not evan close to being done I just finehed world 1. I AM TYING MY BEST TO STAY CALM BUT IT IS HARD when people think your work is JUNK! Not to be mean but how would you is your game like it if i said your game has a face that would scare snakes? If one more spam post comes in about my game i am DONE with mb! But what hurts me even more is I thought we were all like one big family here at the fourms but i guess we are not are we? But there are some one that likes my game his name is the_mario_gru. and my game has now been shelved i will continue work on it some time in september that is right it will not be coming out this year but when it comes out are you or are you not going to play it i will not take mabey for an awnser. also I am not tying to be mean or cause trouble but it really hurts me you can tell me if you do not like but tell me in a nicer way like i think you should probably fix that or that.

I'm sorry if you think i was a little bit too harsh on you but next time I won't do that.  

thats ok you do not have to be sorry look at it this way you got to start work on my game again. I am really excited for your game super mecha bros or whatever it is called to come out where will I be able to download it?

yes but before that I'm trying to create an executable file of my game when it's finished because I'm actually using Mario Builder on a mac (crap..... I exposed my secret  )

- I  have changed world 2s name to desert land.
-Changed world 1s layout.
-Bug Fixes
- Changed world 3s layout.

-Changed world 2s layout.

I will post more updated screens soon.

Somehow I feel like I need to set something straight here.

levi8george, you were kind of acting immature. Mechasaur and Yohser weren't trying to be mean to you, they were trying to give you some constructive feedback. Sure it may have come off as a little harsh but you kinda overreacted. Your game has potential, and I don't know if you're still working on it, but if you're reading this...

Next time just take the criticism and try and use it to make the better project for everyone.